Amazon & Goodreads Human-Hand Review For My Book!

Good morning folks!

I feel delighted this morning as I realized immediately with the start of the day, I had received my first, human hand book review - besides ChatGPT and Gemini - through the Booksprout campaign platform for my fairytale fantasy pocket book When Magic Truly Happens!

"Christian fantasy narrative"

Reviewed in the United Kingdom on 22 July 2024
 
"Jennifer meets Jack, who sees something in her. Jack invites Jennifer to meet his world and all his friends in Snow White's circle. This is an extremely short story with a Christian message alongside the fantasy narrative.

I received a review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily."
 
By Louise
 
Reviews are distributed via the platform across all possible touchpoints - retailers - selected, so I want to truly thank Louise for the comments as well as people in Booksprout for the continuous support they offer before, during and after campaigns!

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Story H: On Creativity & Feelings

INT. GREECE – CHURCH – LITURGY – DAY

SCARLETT, 33, a computer analyst and a screenwriter and ANGELA, her best friend have come to the liturgy. Snapshots from the eagle-like statues, the mesmerizing atmosphere and the passion of the cantors performing Byzantine music. After a while, preaching begins. Moments of reading the gospel before the initiative of the PRIEST.

The priest paraphrases the parable of the transfiguration of Jesus that was supposed to have dinner with a woman, only to be kicked out three times.

PRIEST

Jesus was supposed to have dinner with a woman, at her house. She was expecting him. It was winter and it was cold. The following day, a poor and devastated woman of old age came knocking on her door, asking for a blanket. She threw her out, telling her she was expecting guests. After a while, another man came asking for food. ‘Go away, I have nothing to give you, I didn’t cook for you’, she said to him throwing him out of her house. After a few hours, a poor and fatigued man came knocking on her door asking for money. ‘This wealth is not yours’, she said and slammed the door in his face. Jesus had not come yet. The next morning, she met Jesus. ‘I’ve been waiting for you, where have you been?’ she asked him. ‘I came three times to you and you kicked me out’. ‘What do you mean?’ she continued surprised. ‘Three poor people, a woman and two men, came at your house asking you to give them warmth, food and money. It was me; I was transformed!’ The woman was shocked and asked for forgiveness…

As he explains the main message of the parable, there’s a glimpse of the Gothic art-like decoration of the Church and the full of passion audience that is being taught.

CUT.

LATER…

EXT. GREECE – CHURCH YARD – DAY

The liturgy is over and people have been given the holy bread to eat. The belfry is being heard as an act of triumph and people already chit-chat with one another.

SCARLETT
Transfigurations are all around us but we barely notice…

ANGELA
Not sure you completely mean what you say.

SCARLETT
I see what others cannot see…

ANGELA
You need an emphasis on your creative mediums.

SCARLETT
Are you referring to my work as a computer analyst and a screenwriter?

ANGELA
Art and Science. Period.

SCARLETT
Creativity originates from our subconscious…

ANGELA
You shall firstly bring it on the conscious level and only later shall you worry about subconscious motifs.

INT. GREECE – COMPUTER STUDIO – ESSAY WRITING – DAY

Scarlett has brought Angela to her computer studio. As the girls get excited with the multiple computers and the work that Scarlett is in the middle of, they start to discuss her recent piece of writing, in between the writing of it.

ANGELA
You’re so open to ideas and abstract logic, Scarlett. You can become a great writer, talking about unproven concepts and theories. You always see patterns and connections not obvious to others…

Scarlett feels excited writing while listening to her best friend. She now searches for quotable language in the internet.

SCARLETT
Are we still figuring out our limits? Some lines were never meant to be crossed however good your cause may seem.

ANGELA
I’m just suggesting to bring things forth.

Scarlett is ready to bounce over her chair with excitement when she discovers a fascinating quote.

SCARLETT
Hey, watch this how it goes, by Robert Frost. Two roads diverged in a wood and I took the one less traveled by, and that has made all the difference.

ANGELA
Meaning?

SCARLETT
That the less accessible paths may hide rough grounds known to very few of us.

Scarlett is in the middle of completing her piece of writing. Giggling with excitement, there are computer snapshots of her creativity at hand as a computer analyst and a writer.

INT. CALIFORNIA – THEATER PERFORMANCE – NIGHT

Scarlett and Angela have gone to the theater to see a remake of Finding Neverland. Several snapshots of the actor portraying J. Barrie, his platonic affair with Sylvia and the relation with her sons that inspired him of writing the story with Peter Pan. They feel moved and excited.

CUT.

LATER…

THEATER BREAK – OUTER SPACE – NIGHT

Angela and Scarlett are having a cigarette while eating pop-corn.

ANGELA
Did it ever cross your mind by now we should all feel responsible of acknowledging our own feelings?

SCARLETT
Emotion is, what tunes matter. The way I got it from J. Barrie.

ANGELA
Do you feel vindicated for the choices you made along your creative and personal life?

SCARLETT
I can only say vindicated for my knowledge and experience of learning to interpret the world… As well as providing myself with excellent opportunities to develop. But… you never know.

ANGELA
I believe, you have something of the sparkle of Christopher Nolan, who put epistemological foundations in writing.

The audience has started leaving the yard of the theater for the second part of Finding Neverland. As the story is highly exciting, there have been paparazzi coming from all over America to interview actors after the premiere. They push and bully each other to be the first.

SCARLET
You never know.

ANGELA
So, may I know what is the meaning of Neverland in your own life? What does it mean to find this elusive and far-reaching place of yours you call a dream?

SCARLET
I should remind you of the liturgy, that we never know or better say most of the times we don’t know the forms through which goodness or Jesus try to visit us…

ANGELA
We should only believe that everything happens for a purpose, right?

SCARLETT
There you go, girl!

Angela and Scarlett are getting prepared to go back to theater to watch the second part of the play.

Photo Credits: Menelaos Gkikas 

Story G: On Virtues & A Well Examined Life...

1.) INT. LONDON – BRENDA’S WRITING STUDIO – AFTERNOON

BRENDA, 21, an English literature student, is having discussions over the internet. The atmosphere is electrified. We watch her next to her elaborately decorated pinboards. A few snapshots on her lips casting her first words:

BRENDA
Me, myself and I…

In between her ambiguous look showing humor as well as sarcasm, she finishes publishing several of her stories in her website.

BRENDA
Let’s see now what kind of metal are you made of, kids…

After a few moments, JACK, 20, an actor, Brenda’s boyfriend, messages her on Viber. Brenda, taken away from her laptop for a few moments to have a break, barely manages to see his name on her iPhone.

BRENDA
Here comes trouble…!

Jack, partly jealous as a result of missing the train with their affair, provocatively stupid and pretentiously off topic, trolls her creative writing accomplishments. Meanwhile, he flushes from the other side of the phone. She glimpses his message.

JACK (written word)
Hello dolly! I’ve read several of your publications… How will all these be done?

Looking angry and ready to raise her decibels, she partly manages to show a neutral response over the phone.

BRENDA (typing)
What exactly do you mean, Jackie?

In between snapshots of their faces as well as their touchscreens, she aggressively continues the response.

BRENDA (typing)
Another delirium of yours?

JACK calls her directly over the Viber.

JACK
Who do you think you are?

BRENDA (furious)
You are not a delegate neither of my partners nor of my family.

Brenda angrily locks her iPhone completely and heads back over her laptop. The crazy little feast of the Facebookians has lit up…

Brenda is bombarded from all over the world in her Messenger, with questions about the booming success of her new books and their plots. Messages roll over the screen with speed.

LORNA
You rock girl! Show them your class!

NAUGHTY GIG has typed both sided emoticons together with a YouTube upload, “Frankie Goes to Hollywood”.

MEAN GIRLS
We’ve come to shake your hand!

TOBIAS (story-wise)
Are they dead?

THE INVISIBLE
You’re the chosen one! You’re great!

Brenda, moved and happy now that her work makes perfect sense of her past and future, shuts down her computer and heads over her bed with the iPhone at hand. As she lays over there to get some rest, she closes her eyes and immediately flashes back to her amateur years of being trained as a writer. The vision of one of her first professors appears.

THE VISION
Unless you show some self-reliance, you will be found fighting with many forces doing good but also doing evil…!

A teardrop rolls on her cheek out of exciting memories.

BRENDA
I guess we’ve learned that maneuver really well, professor, right?

2.) EXT. LONDON – HARD ROCK CAFE – DAY

Brenda and Jack are having a breakfast out in the yard of Hard Rock Café in London, being on the verge of breaking up. It’s summer and there’s an otherworldly charm applying a peculiar effect at their talkings. The outside world seems joyfully celebrating.

BRENDA
Where have your acting, or better say pretending abilities led you Jackie, so far?

JACK (almost collapsing)
Definitely not in choosing sides, like you do.

BRENDA
I didn’t choose a side but a sidekick. But you haven’t learned to love yet, right? You only cared about race horses that will continuously run for new accomplishments…

JACK (furious)
Accomplishments? You wanna know about accomplishments?

BRENDA
Jockeying for position…

As the music of Hard Rock Café is getting groovier and people pass by with excitement in the mood of summer festivities, their conversation reaches a climax.

JACK
I care about peace and well-being.

BRENDA (ironic, giggling)
Full of love…

JACK
Yes, love.

BRENDA
Well, let me state the case for you Jack. This is not an emotional issue. You do something right, you have a working plan and that’s great. Anything else is just misery.

JACK (feeling defeated)
So long, Brenda Wells. I could still see you again at some other universe.

3.) INT. LONDON - ENGLISH LITERATURE AMPHITHEATRE – DAY

Being after the end of summer vacations, Brenda is brought back to the everyday excitement of university life. Students’ long memory and deep hard drives are once again into the mood of writing hits. A few snapshots linking their brainstorming and storytelling inspiration, showing the perversion of the most geniuses in other words, with the eschatology of the 21st century. Students are in the midst of writing again.

A little while before the start of their university class, the atmosphere in the amphitheatre is electrified. DR. WHALES would be teaching the Romantics.

STUDENT A
Who is teaching the Romantics?

STUDENT B
His majesty of Dr. Whales!

STUDENT C
It gets me up!

BRENDA (partly confident)
Are you serious?

STUDENT D
Seriousness, accountability, it seems we’ll have to memorize the entire Lord Byron by heart…

The class begins as Dr. Whales enters the amphitheatre. Rumors in the class started naming him The Unorthodox professor.

STUDENT B (partly whispering)
Attack on the Titan!

BRENDA (mystified)
The Titan?

Student C, sitting next to Brenda, silently whispers to her with his hand over his mouth.

STUDENT C
Prometheus!

It was partly known due to his former classes Dr. Whales always used to start his classes with some anecdotes related to Prometheus.

DR. WHALES
Good morning class, we’ll be doing The Romantics this semester and you shall be quested to exceed all expectations. You’ll be doing research, comparative literature, prepare for the exams as well as writing your own pieces.

He stays silent for one moment.

DR. WHALES starts narrating the story of Prometheus, The Titan who is occupied with the Creation of Man by clay. He steals the creative fire from The Gods and attributes it to humans and as a result of that, he is being found onto a rock with eagles eating his livers every now and then…

DR. WHALES
And what is known as the moral lesson of this story, may I know?

BRENDA
Professor?

DR. WHALES
Yes, may I know your name?

BRENDA
I’m Brenda. How can someone from a champion of humanity be led to unpredicted outcomes…

DR. WHALES
Exactly! What dear Brenda here foreshadows is that with me, you will be battling Renaissance! The clash with the past so to surpass classical antiquity belongs to those who have closed the doors with it completely. As long as that’s true, we can’t be doing synthetic work which shall be the quest and the utmost ideal of yours. Am I understood?

Brenda flashes back to her break up at the Hard Rock Café only to bring back to memory a quote she had heard at cinema, somewhere in the internet land by great actors.

The laptop screen is brought onto her mind.

ACTOR
A well examined life is a life worth living…

Photo Credits: Menelaos Gkikas

Story F: Students-Instructors Teams Search Their True Calling!

1.) INT. NEW YORK HIGH SCHOOL – REHEARSAL STUDIOS – DAY

KEVIN, 26, daily inspires his students quoting the Dead Poets Society, “Seize the day” & “Words change lives” were his recent comments to them. They’re having a rehearsal for their dancing-theatrical performance near the end of their school year.

KEVIN

There’s only one thing I should remind you kids in the midst of acting classes. You should get trained in stop listening to other voices.

BRENDA, 16, an actor, looks awkward while playing, listening to his realizations. They’re playing next to a piano while having several moments for breaks and coaching. This time was one of them, at the moment of ending their scene.

BRENDA

Getting us disillusioned professor? Let’s see where this will lead us…

Kevin also plays the piano. He sits in front of it, and they prepare for their next scene.

KEVIN

Becoming spectators and hands clappers is a worse case than merely being disillusioned folks…

BRENDA

And you won’t stop until you save the world, right?

Students gossip silently and laugh while listening to acting advices. They look absorbed and over performing in their numbers while the atmosphere has something of the magic of early youth actors.

Kevin starts playing a piece of music and one by one his students listen and some of them start participating and following his rhythm.

CUT.

LATER…

STUDENTS, talk and gossip while at a break in the rehearsal studios.

BRENDA

Someone should get interested about his trajectory. I hate seeing him decay…

JASON, who has listened to his classmate’s comment approaches her sarcastically.

JASON

You are having a crush Brenda, right?

BRENDA

Worrying to match words with actions affects all of us Jason. I feel sorry for you as well…

JASON

The school diva… Who got As in his class and believes the world is at her feet!

BRENDA

I have found my voice, Jason. Pity for those like you, who still wear masks!

As Kevin re-enters their company, they’re getting prepared for the play.

2.) INT. NEW YORK HIGH SCHOOL – STUDENTS’ CLASSROOM – BREAK – DAY

Students nearly finish their math class. As their professor leaves their classroom, they take sometime to talk. Brenda sits next to JULIE and they start talking.

JULIE

Kevin worries about our voice and you, decided to weight all of them Brenda, right?

BRENDA

Hey, lose the attitude Julie, OK?

JULIE

Kevin believes that if he becomes more professional and less an ecologist, he will lose something of his treasured creativity. I’m fed up! I might decide of letting go of my part. See ya…

Julie ends the discussion with a sarcastic smile, stands up and leaves the classroom…

As Brenda shakes her head buffled, she stands up as well and heads outside the classroom straight towards the lockers. The atmosphere inside school halls is cheerful and there’s music and talk doing coming from the megaphones of the school radio. Space and time during these moments get something from the sparkle of eternity.

As two girls, KELLY and MYRIAM from their class next to theirs gossip on Brenda, she reaches the lockers. Meanwhile they decide to approach her.

KELLY

The entire high is talking about your performance Brenda. Has the protagonist part been locked on you, by now?

As Brenda takes her books and locks her lockers, she shows she has nothing to say to her competitors and weaves goodbye with minimal words.

BRENDA

You bet so, little girls…

Near the exit of their school hall towards the campus, Kevin stares at Brenda from apart and decides to reach out to her. Brenda has a mixed outlook whenever she talks to him outside from some school performance. As she walks towards the exit, she weaves at him and walks a little bit faster to meet him. Kevin takes off his earphones listening to music and starts talking.

KEVIN (enthusiastically)

What’s up Brenda? Are you still passionate to act? The performance is in less than 3 weeks.

BRENDA (partly ironic, partly content)

Light my fire Mr. Robinson!

KEVIN

Take away the other world’s influence my dear… For no matter how hard you try, you still struggle to come to life…

BRENDA

So, I should make bigger mistakes of feeling complete with it?

KEVIN

The devil is in the details…

BRENDA

If only you could listen to your raw material and listen to the words you say…

They greet each other and leave.

3.) INT. NEW YORK – HIGH SCHOOL PARTY – BASKETBALL STADIUM – NIGHT

Students are having a party while the former cheerleaders of their previous events perform a dancing number. The school year has finished and there’s a sense of melancholy in their face. They look more mature than usual in the face of time.

As Brenda talks with some rest of her classmates, they’re holding a drink while feeling excited about the future. JACK, an antagonist of Brenda in the play takes the floor. He looks content with finishing the year but partly disappointed with Brenda.

JACK

I only have one complaint about you, Brenda…

BRENDA

I’m all ears!

JACK

From the very first day you started mingling with theater and other school projects, you seem to believe the rest of us exist outside of you…

BRENDA (partly hostile)

Failing to become a double personality like you?

JACK

There’s a timing you have to listen at, Brenda, make it count…

Brenda looking partly arrogant and moving her head towards the opposite direction, she pays attention to her best friend at the other side of the stadium and beckons him to come closer.

BRENDA (to JACK)

There’s always something you have to give and take Jack… Not very good with compromising…

JACK

Unless you’re forced to confess your true self…

BRENDA (turning the argument to the other side)

Willing to try Jack? You have a long road to walk.

Meanwhile, Brenda’s best friend ROBERT arrives and she makes a few steps outside of her previous company.

The party goes on.

Photo Credits: Menelaos Gkikas

Amazon & Goodreads Human-Hand Review For My Book!

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