Story E: The Unbearable Lightness Of Youth!
Story D: "Not In This World, Sebastian...!"
INT. LA CALIFORNIA – WRITING ROOM – WINTER DAY
SEBASTIAN
has a break in his writing office. He looks absorbed by the tools,
whiteboards, pinboards, templates, verbal acknowledgement of structural
components, his library, software, notes and printed screenplays around
him, in terms of his recent screenwriting venture. MIA, who’s having a
break drinking coffee next to Sebastian, accompanies him with her
thoughts.
MIA
The great writer at work! How’s it going, my dear? A penny for your thoughts…
SEBASTIAN
Have you read this book Mia?
Sebastian grabs Joseph Campbell’s book, The Hero With A Thousand Faces and holds it next to his face to show it to Mia.
MIA
It’s definitely a great book, of course! It portrays the hero’s journey.
SEBASTIAN
That exists as an expression of the writer but not as a creation. That’s my greatest conflict right now in my mindset.
Sebastian,
who is a Physicist and a Writer and Mia, who is a Musical Programmer
take advantage of the environment to reach their arguments. Mia sits
next to Sebastian’s piano pretending she is a singer – sings a little –
and Sebastian mimes with his hands writing fastly on the keyboard.
MIA
I guess your Einstein studies didn’t quite predict such an evolution, right?
SEBASTIAN
This is a war and not a fairytale, Mia.
MIA
Go on then. Express yourself. What’s holding you back?
SEBASTIAN
Beyond
the script assumptions of a narrative economy. It’s a match made in
hell right now of how I will manage to reach the other side, complete
the script and sell it…
MIA
We should all feel grateful of who we are including the respect of our ego.
As Mia keeps playing the piano and Sebastian gets up to play with his telescope based next to his window in this quite big and comfortable room, Mia draws back from her experiences in music. She looks at the piano with a joyful and enigmatic look.
SEBASTIAN
It looks you’re so confident and serious when it comes to creativity, right?
MIA
Not in this world, Sebastian…! At least not when it seems you bit the apple.
SEBASTIAN
Meaning?
MIA
Do
you truly believe artists are the sole persons who can have the life
they desire? You? An internationally renowned Physicist? Oh boy, it’s a
multifaceted world!
As
Sebastian stays silent and looking serious, he grabs a book and browses
its first pages only to pronounce the quote he had written inside of
it. He shows the quote to Mia with his one hand.
SEBASTIAN
“In the journey of discovering ourselves, the subject is more important than the label”.
INT. LA CALIFORNIA – WORKPLACE BREAK ROOM – LOUNGE – DAY
Sebastian
also works as a data scientist in a multinational. They’re having a
break from work and he has called Mia, his girlfriend, at the company to
have a good time during their break. Whiteboards with equations also
exist in the lounge.
MIA
You must be giving a tough battle right now, right?
SEBASTIAN
It’s just this whirlwind of attributes doesn’t always function…
MIA
Says who?
SEBASTIAN (ironic)
The data scientist!
MIA
Science
is independent from the scope it’s being used for… Just remember how
many physicists from your class became data scientists, how many of them
became researchers at e.g. the LHC at CERN and how many of them ended
up primary secondary education professors at public schools…
While
Sebastian looks somewhat annoyed and serious, he gets up to approach
the whiteboard next to him to play with a few equations…
MIA (angry, CONT’D)
Never ever confuse the science with the career Sebastian…
SEBASTIAN
I guess we may not all deserve a wonderful world…
MIA
Is this your conclusion from your writing hurdles?
SEBASTIAN
I guess so!
MIA
Well, it’s not true, not even for your future colleagues in the entertainment industry.
SEBASTIAN
Where are you heading at, Mia?
MIA
Even
producers and directors nowadays are technology heavyweights from what
you already know from their resumes and being a writer, a sci-fi writer
concerning your script means that accuracy is not guaranteed. You have
to find your inner voice…
SEBASTIAN
I guess I will have to invest more time, maturity and a decent amount of money…
Mia with a faint smile now that Sebastian tries to find an edge, get’s up from the table and hits him at the shoulder while he gets back from the whiteboard to sit.
MIA (enthusiastic)
That’s right!
INT. LA CALIFORNIA – COFFEEHOUSE – SATURDAY AFTERNOON
Mia and Sebastian are having a coffee while they discuss their experiences and Sebastian’s journey. They look partly happy and partly disappointed by their realizations.
MIA
You were always looking to find certain standards at people, Seb. Now it seems that affected you as well…!
SEBASTIAN
I’ve been at theater workshops, volunteerism, writing associations, book clubs, dance schools…
Sebastian looks disappointed that his past enquiries didn’t seem to work or be fruitful.
MIA
So?
SEBASTIAN
We
can’t predict how others think. Plus, it was an alchemy in my mind to
believe such institutions could possibly solve someone else’s problems.
MIA
They’re doing their work, Sebastian… What’s yours?
SEBASTIAN
Being
affected I suppose… Political fanatism, underdeveloped individuals,
left wing partly rebels, Facebook attacks and indifference is what I
ended up mingling with.
MIA
Has that led you to illumination?
Sebastian looks Mia with wonder.
SEBASTIAN
That I should focus on serving myself and not serving the world I suppose…
Story A: The Transfigurations Of A Poetically Inspired Scientist!
NOAH sits on his leather chair at his study office in his apartment. As a background, including the two side walls, there is a library with leather-bound books on the shelves of which there are numerous wooden constructions and sentimental cultural items including scientific equipment.
VOICE OVER
This will be a story about the things that change, a story on transfigurations, to portray how from the old occur the new, a poetic testament of NOAH revealing how one man’s vision can be shifted into the universe of words and change lives! A physicist and a writer, that is Noah, is found at the in-between of his past life with the future exploiting the precious love of his family to change perceptions. Who is to say about destiny in front of God’s eyes?
NOAH is discussing with his son, ROBERT, at his office. They read John’s Revelation. ROBERT closes his eyes to start envisioning the city of God. There’s an otherworldly electricity in the atmosphere at the shades of dark brown and creamy light pink, equivalent with the interior decoration of the office.
ROBERT
And out of precious stones, gold and several other artifacts there will be created a Heaven in which there will be no anathema and people there will reign as kings forever!
Robert soliloquizes. Noah stares at his son with an approbative look. Immediately afterwards Robert slightly opens his eyes and uses his imagination to start transforming the environment around him.
ROBERT
At the beginning, there is only word. And word will become the poetic tool of God to create a universe that is not made up by atoms but by tiny stories…
NOAH (passionate and inspired with his son)
You know it, Robert! The power of God is inside of you! What is it that’s keeping you from accepting God into your deeds and actions and transform your life?
ROBERT
Our life, father, is a far cry from what once it could be. The question is, are we willing to fight and adapt and struggle to get back to our own Belle Epoque of creativity?
NOAH
Naaah… We got disappointed once but life is for those who keep trying!
VOICE-OVER
There was always a vision inside Noah’s head, the windswept sperms of which were being reflected into the environment and were being got back through the prism of words inside his online diary. As if this was a canon that perhaps, what he once thought it could be his own identity was not what it seemed and there were always paradigms and humans from the outside, with the same common basic needs with him that were guiding his thoughts and actions. Even though not the perfect decision maker, he was a great listener. But now, there was something in both of them and their thoughts that was being rebirthed around them, as an invisible miracle or an act of Renaissance.
INT. NY – LIVING ROOM - DAY
Paintings and figures were being reanimated, leather-bound books onto the tables were being opened to emit stardust, men from the past were being brought back in his memory and even this fatal period of being an entrepreneur would remind him the bittersweet days of his glory but also the other side of doom.
ROBERT
As a writer and a scientist haunted by the excitement but also the ghosts of the past, I believe dad you possess the perfect raw material to refine your future. The question that remains to be answered is…, are you willing to?
NOAH
It’s still… it, Robert! Notions and words and ideas isolated and personified can be the best argument when we read literature for example but I still can’t explain it in real life.
ROBERT
Then perhaps it’s the interpretation that you give. A selfish approach with which you complete the entire work as a team, on your own thoughts and then cancel the other side…
NOAH
A team… Or an imagined dream team… I guess it’s just a matter of time and mind…
A sudden shift into Noah’s and Robert’s study office and John’s Revelation that was being left onto the desk was being opened to create apparitions in the room. As if all the people that Noah interacted with at the past, were being brought back as avatars from parallel universes, his beloved ghosts, and they would interact with him, emerged from the spacetime of Revelation, only to lead to catharsis.
FIGURE 1
You’re being lost inside the flow Noah…! Management should be all about spirituality!
FIGURE 2
These should be moments of great decisions…!
FIGURE 3
Congratulations! I wish only distinctions for you Noah!
FIGURE 4
I can’t found a theory if I don’t accept a hypothesis externally defined! For Einstein, this was the speed of light…
As a stream of consciousness and memories, a light beam risen from the book and travelled up to the living room, these apparitions into the air had come back, so now Noah’s mind was being bombarded by a mixed reality of emotions and thoughts.
ROBERT
I believe mocking is a repetitive motif when it comes to your history dad… Dirtying the sacred maybe?
NOAH
I don’t know! I just don’t know!
ROBERT
Any idea of how to honor your past and the memory of all those you left behind?
NOAH
Words and patterns… Scientists are makers of patterns…
Noah immediately afterwards started to touch and play with the wooden constructions and the scientific equipment that was found in their living room. A wooden globe standing in the middle of it, a small telescope onto a shelf, a ship resembling the boat of Columbus, a kaleidoscope, Noah would turn around the medium size space and would fight with his ideas and emotions.
NOAH (CONT’D)
I guess we shouldn’t put the blame to men that did everything they could and they just had no more to give, right? Or it’s just that they couldn’t give…
ROBERT
The future holds secrets only the past can reveal… And in this journey, nothing is what it seems and nothing lasts forever!
VOICE-OVER
Noah has been a scientist and a writer who would lack the motivation to acknowledge the good that was being done to him and only accuse others based on their weaknesses and personal attacks! Not until the revelatory experience had he realized destiny was only known to God and unless he could find a way to reconciliate with him and his own stories, he couldn’t be expecting of more to come… And even though perfection belongs to Him and only, force majeure is a reality of humans, right?
The Entire Education Is Theater "For Writers"...!
On Complex Characters & Their Dialogue
But what about flat versus complex characters and their dialogue, in general? Flat is the opposite of complex. Complex characters are real and multi-layered 3D characters whereas flat characters are one-dimensional characters. Many writers as we write, we expose our knowledge and experiences and ideas as a whole and right afterwards we distribute this model to everyone, in later stages this might be wrong especially if the majority of this displaying occurs at the dialogistic level. Better examples may be understood by you in terms of earlier discussions on the unification of literature with screenwriting. When it comes to characters information delivered is not valid unless it is delivered in a physical fashion. It doesn’t matter how characters talk but the necessity of them being absorbed in specific building blocks of writing, into specific scenic spacetime with scene headings and themed activities better elaborated by analytical discussions and advanced vocabulary dependent on these specific structures…!
All I am trying to venture today is to discuss closer to execution… Still, do the above guarantee the writer’s memory on everyone? You would say there should be characters’ development not in our minds but on arguments by design. Multiple characters’ development where if so far, this meant the single distribution of the writer’s idea and the sharing of his ego multiply, now we have to come up with independent character analyses and independent creative development, where such descriptions should be bound by mentioning exact scenes where characters’ attributes are visible. With this and that, discussions judge the necessity of development not in the script but surrounding to its nature and dependent on the writers’ notes and notebooks, online or offline. Wouldn’t it be wise after all to spend more time on development and feeling successful than thinking overnight and still feel stuck eternally? Have a great time folks!
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On The Real-World Implications Of Creativity!
Nevertheless, I promised to discuss the real-world implications of the above that brings us to the terrain of a guided principle mined from the book of Stephen Covey, The 7 Habits of Highly Effective People. For this reason, I will shift the excerpt of the book from the company perspective to the individuals’ perspective. Here it goes;
“What makes an individual tick, why do some become built to last (while others fall), and why do some thrive in chaos?” One of our key findings is the idea of “Preserve the Core / Stimulate Progress”; no one can become or remain truly great without a core set of principles to preserve, to build upon, to serve as an anchor, to provide guidance in the face of an ever-changing world. … Covey found a similar pattern in personal effectiveness; first build upon a strong core of principles that are not open for continuous change; at the same time, be relentless in the quest for improvement and continuous self-renewal. …
Battling the super-productive model, Covey later in his book writes;
“But is there a chance that efficiency is not the answer? Is getting more things done in less time going to make a difference – or will it just increase the pace at which I react to people and circumstances that seem to control my life?”
The daily clock, the counter, I suggest it should hit zero. Notions of developmental psychology including the rationale of this book, are very heavy to be grasped by mere reading… Individuals wonder, should I step out of it? And later come back to face the facts stronger and rejuvenated? Here, the answer for those that do not seek temporary results is no. Writers should first of all be able to distinguish the ego from the shadow, the way these things are described in the area of several mentioned archetypes that form the techniques of our model of thought. Cumulatively, there are archetypes for the ego and archetypes for the shadow presented as interdependent opposites being described below;
Ego; great mother, old wise man, animus, meaning, centrality, order, opposition, time, sacred, light, transformation
Shadow; Tyrannical father, trickster, anima, absurdity, diffusion, chaos, conjunction, eternity, profane, darkness, fixity
Every archetype of the ego is interdependent with an archetype of the shadow that could be described with two columns, the ego and the shadow. Writers now want to search and figure out the essence of bringing our work to the light of day successfully by defeating the ever-changing shadow. This could possibly mean, based on the two columns that time is not infinite and those who believe that the entire infinity and the entire eternity should be quested at this point of our lives are not welcome.
In the book I write, a fairytale fantasy novella, words couldn’t be clearer: “…where nothing is what it seems and nothing lasts forever…” But how can such a concept be visualized? By thinking collectively! That’s right folks, the ego and the shadow exist as a collectivity of things and dimensions brought to surface through a spectrum of different prime emotional needs for all individuals. These ideas including the set core which cannot be subject to continuous change constitute the notions as well, of how the fixed and the fluid, the variable parts of literature will become one fixed body of reached greatness! Meaning, that up until standards and accomplishments have been maximized, performance scores of pieces of art indicate the binary value of scripts, meaning that scores are based on what other screenplays got. Meaning, again, that judgement comes always by comparison and that we have to mime patterns and a few all-star masterpieces to reach standards. For me and my book that has been brought for evaluation at WeScreenplay, Hollywood’s #1 Script Coverage Service, this standard is La La Land with Ryan Gosling and Emma Stone. Of course, that’s the creative standard and not the dimension of distinctions 😉
Can the above mean more when it comes to how mindsets should focus their writing on getting real world reflections? Meaning, are there more than talking about the dimensionality of characters and scripts in real life? Time concerns, is one such. Creativity should not flow mechanically and it should take time. Conclusively I would like to close this script with how we, writers, should stick to our creative personas, master our alter egos and get past the hunting of other dreams. Which means self-awareness, self-confidence and disillusioned thinking! Have a great time folks!
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Multimedia Publishing OR Cinematic Storytelling
Literature is the arena of sophisticated descriptions and we have seen already that if canons of literature unify with the canons of screenwriting, then movie scripts can be considered audio-visual literature as well. Many times, mere literature but not cinematic storytelling, rotates around completely different natures of narrative elements and dimensions. There may be thought, fantasy travelling, narrator’s voice, etc. This means that what is left from the script to be devoted on how to super-develop a cast is not enough. Accurately, it is much less than enough. Screenplay characters, it’s theory for every script, have 5 prime emotional needs: love, comfort, validation, respect, justice. Love should not be confused with comfort nor validation with respect. Based on this as well as the fact that the popular structure of screenplays is The 3 Acts Structure, meaning to divide the script in 3 Acts, where every act is being developed appropriately, means that argumentation on literature is very different than argumentation on screenplays. Behind the reality of greenlights, movie theaters and a big audience hides a cultural gap that is based on favoring object-oriented writing if compared with intellectualism. So, these objectives focus entirely on character development that affect the entire architecture of the script. A lot of people who read books including us, the writers who write these books, can only think in terms of literature but not in terms of analyzing casting through the eyes of a Hollywood reader and later on, actors and directors. As it is not necessarily right to juggle between three different jobs of the entertainment industry, it’s only the writer’s mind that can do the job right...
This means “structured” argumentation and real-world experiences. Nevertheless, bridging gaps matters more than ever. In any case, multimedia publishing perspectives in terms of content guidelines from big data markets such as Amazon and Apple iTunes, Ingram, etc, is as perfect as our first thoughts towards it, as perfect as we initially dreamed of it all along! For it is true in the majority of the cases that cinematic storytelling has 70% more characters’ development sufficiency than literature! Have a great time folks!
Voice Introduces A New Experience: The Creative Mindset!
In order to speak, we need a voice. Characters both in novels and screenplays are being judged by their authenticity and uniqueness, implying the matching of words with actions which is pictured through their voice. This applies to business world as well. When dealing with marketing or technology we wonder: marketing according to whom? According to how it is presented at college? According to what the applied business world urges based on the production system? According to what the world or the public opinion poses in order to influence more? And when dealing with the triad creative – marketing – technology, how does one dimension affect the other, if combined? Isn’t it true that the writer or the individual markets his ideas, experiences and world view and his behavior (better or worse) in specific spacetimes?
So, let’s analyze the above! An individual, that is a character, a writer or a professional will be parameterized on lots of denominations: age, gender, education, profession, interests, experiences, politics or religion, vision, stage of evolution, relational potential, entertainment tastes and if further applied, principles and value systems. One very important aspect we, you, have to know before being trapped is that systems drive behavior meaning that whatever you sow, you reap… The speech of a Greek artist in TEDx was entitled that you have to “Create skies if you want to see stars”. So, metaphorically, as usually, (that is both an irony and approbation) the skies are many… But if we can all agree to archetypal considerations, this means commonalities for all people, we can learn better and perform better when it comes to the dimensions described.
The picture above portrays sound waves, hence the product of synthesis has to be clearly defined and understood if it is to be applied, schematically, to the creative writing, marketing and technology arenas… As a first observation, I consider it has great perturbational value. As a writer, our characters have to be unique, authentic and with a crystal-clear shape of story arc. This is what characterization means, for books and screenplays. All matter is pulled by the gravity of the world that it comes from, and not any other. This implies a clear identification of filtering a product of many voices, nevertheless it leaves at the mercy of God novice individuals, ‘little boys’ and ‘little girls’ who may not yet possess ‘the mechanisms’ to defend against the brutal reality of the 21st century.
Little by little though I have outlined character structure and as you know, the available themes in literature and cinema can be many. Exactly the same analysis is applied to marketing and technology. First things first. In order to do marketing, you need a product. Price, promotion and marketplaces, are shaped around the tangible reality of a specific product or a specific service. But at the center of the markets of Western capitalism lay consumers, individuals, humans… So, applying what has been mentioned above, shouldn’t there be demographics, profiles and psychographics for market analysis exactly as a writer defines character structures? They exist since the dawn of marketing.
So far, I described quite analytically the independent dimensions creative, marketing, technology, but I have not yet discussed how the one affects the other. Affection though is complicated and indirect. First things first. A few observations of mine in the internet. Having witnessed the web since 2007, there are occasions of people swelling, inflating the world of others and presenting it as accomplishments, or applying previously reported failures, bloody massacres only to prove better. In a world where what matters most is not what we’re alike at, but at what we differ (including extra-terrestrial intelligence), originality is important. These strategies won’t fail from day one. But in leadership there is comparative evaluation. They fail as being part of somebody else’s strategy and not your own strategy. The swelling of ‘your neighbor’ but not your own.
Hence there is a raw material for everyone, proving that the rights and the mistakes are very specific and common for everyone. Geographical restrictions or liberation, individuals following international standards and not acting like localists, thinking globally and acting locally, may prove differences in subject matter. May create a Greek artist following his Hollywood passion. May borrow themes from abroad. May engage in literature without borders. May quest bibliographical and technological research to create a network. And they make people understand better the digital reality of the 21st century. A world where pioneering science and AI, marketing, technology and creativity dance all together at the perturbational universe described at the photo above. Have a great time folks!
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